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Changeling Posted 18 years ago
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persimmons
0 Hi everybody! 02 br
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00 Could you, please, help me to express the idea below in a more correct way. Are there any mistakes? 02 br
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00 You have to know how to select the right fruit (persimmon) so that you won't be dissatisfied with its astringent taste. Store persimmons with care, trying not to damage its skin. It is better to store them frozen. Actually, freezing is a way to remove the astringency of persimmons. 02 br
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00 Thanks in advance 0-
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00 Could you, please, help me to express the idea below in a more correct way. Are there any mistakes? 02 br
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00 You have to know how to select the right fruit (persimmon) so that you won't be dissatisfied with its astringent taste. Store persimmons with care, trying not to damage its skin. It is better to store them frozen. Actually, freezing is a way to remove the astringency of persimmons. 02 br
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0 Hi, 02 br 02 br 01 font 00 Could you, please, help me to express the idea below in a more correct way. Are there any mistakes? 02 font 02 br 02 br 01 font 00 You have to know how to select the right fruit (persimmon) so that you won't be dissatisfied with its astringent taste.
- 0 Hi, 02 br 02 br 01 font 00 Could you, please, help me to express the idea below in a more correct way.
- Are there any mistakes?
- 02 font 02 br 02 br 01 font 00 You have to know how to select the right fruit (persimmon) so that you won't be dissatisfied with its astringent taste.
- Store persimmons with care, trying not to damage its skin.
- It is better to store them frozen.
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0 Hi, 02 br
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01 font 00 Could you, please, help me to express the idea below in a more correct way. Are there any mistakes? 02 font 02 br
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01 font 00 You have to know how to select the right fruit (persimmon) so that you won't be dissatisfied with its astringent taste. Store persimmons with care, t
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01 font 00 Could you, please, help me to express the idea below in a more correct way. Are there any mistakes? 02 font 02 br
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01 font 00 You have to know how to select the right fruit (persimmon) so that you won't be dissatisfied with its astringent taste. Store persimmons with care, t
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0 Hi, Clive 02 br
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00 Thanks a lot for your help. Is it ok to say "have to know how to select the RIGHT fruit"? I doubted that very much. Actually, I'm surprised with a few corrections. 0-
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00 Thanks a lot for your help. Is it ok to say "have to know how to select the RIGHT fruit"? I doubted that very much. Actually, I'm surprised with a few corrections. 0-
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0 Hi, 02 br
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00 Yes, it's OK. Of course, the reader/listener has to understand what you mean by 'right'. eg 01 i 00 the fruit that tastes best to you 02 i 00 or perhaps 01 i 00 the fruit that is best for your health. 02 i 02 br
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00 Best wishes again, Clive 0-
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00 Yes, it's OK. Of course, the reader/listener has to understand what you mean by 'right'. eg 01 i 00 the fruit that tastes best to you 02 i 00 or perhaps 01 i 00 the fruit that is best for your health. 02 i 02 br
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00 Best wishes again, Clive 0-
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