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Changeling Posted 18 years ago
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persimmon again :)

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00Could you, please, check if I express myself correctly?02br
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00This is the sweetest fruit with glucose and fructose making up a quarter of its weight. A few of them can stave off hunger. 02br
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00Thanks in advance0-
  

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0 01blockquote 01cite 10changeling12cite 10Hi everybody! Could you, please, check if I express myself correctly? 12br 10This is 11u 10the sweetest fruit12u 10 11b 10one of the sweetest fruit, 12b 10with glucose and fructose making up a quarter of its weight.

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  • 0 01blockquote 01cite 10changeling12cite 10Hi everybody!
  • Could you, please, check if I express myself correctly?
  • 12br 10This is 11u 10the sweetest fruit12u 10 11b 10one of the sweetest fruit, 12b 10with glucose and fructose making up a quarter of its weight.
  • A few of them can stave off hunger.
  • 12br 12br 10Thanks in advance12br 10 I think you need a qualification about "sweetest", but otherwise the sentences are fine.
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0 01blockquote
01cite10changeling12cite10Hi everybody! Could you, please, check if I express myself correctly? 12br
10This is 11u10the sweetest fruit12u10 11b10one of the sweetest fruit, 12b10with glucose and fructose making up a quarter of its weight. A few of them can stave off hunger
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