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Sun 94 Posted 15 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Performed a gig
If you see any mistakes in the following sentences,can I have your comments?
My affectiong for rock led me to play guitar. In my high school years, I joined the school band and performed various gigs.I constatly put efforts to perform like a real musician.Joining the band allwed me to learn a priceless lesson.
My affectiong for rock led me to play guitar. In my high school years, I joined the school band and performed various gigs.I constatly put efforts to perform like a real musician.Joining the band allwed me to learn a priceless lesson.
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affection (no 'g' - probably a typo) allowed (probably another typo) I think I hear 'do' or 'have' gigs, but 'perform' certainly makes sense.
- affection (no 'g' - probably a typo) allowed (probably another typo) I think I hear 'do' or 'have' gigs, but 'perform' certainly makes sense.
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affection (no 'g' - probably a typo)
allowed (probably another typo)
I think I hear 'do' or 'have' gigs, but 'perform' certainly makes sense.
allowed (probably another typo)
I think I hear 'do' or 'have' gigs, but 'perform' certainly makes sense.
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Dear sun 94
I have underlined and highlighted items that need work.Have a dictionary and thesaurus handy.
My affectiong for rock led me to play guitar. In my high school years, I joined the school band and performed various gigs. I constatly put efforts to perform like a real musician.Joining the band allwed me to learn a p
I have underlined and highlighted items that need work.Have a dictionary and thesaurus handy.
My affectiong for rock led me to play guitar. In my high school years, I joined the school band and performed various gigs. I constatly put efforts to perform like a real musician.Joining the band allwed me to learn a p
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