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Vincent Teo Posted 15 years ago
Grammar
Performances are performed
Can I say,
(a) The stadium had many people on National Day. The school bands marched at the stadium. Many performances are performed by children such as dances and singing.
(b) We watched the performances by the children dancers.
(a) The stadium had many people on National Day. The school bands marched at the stadium. Many performances are performed by children such as dances and singing.
(b) We watched the performances by the children dancers.
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Hi Vincent, Can I say, I have marked in red some words that are repeated in an unnatural way. Can you find a way to avoid this repetition? (a) The stadium had many people on National Day.
- Hi Vincent, Can I say, I have marked in red some words that are repeated in an unnatural way.
- Can you find a way to avoid this repetition?
- (a) The stadium had many people on National Day.
- The school bands marched at the stadium .
- Many performances are performed by children such as dances and singing.
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Hi Vincent,
Can I say,
I have marked in red some words that are repeated in an unnatural way. Can you find a way to avoid this repetition?
(a) The stadium had many people on National Day. The school bands marched at
Can I say,
I have marked in red some words that are repeated in an unnatural way. Can you find a way to avoid this repetition?
(a) The stadium had many people on National Day. The school bands marched at
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I try:
(a) The stadium had many people on National Day. The school bands marched there. Many performances are done by children such as dances and singing.
(b) We watched the performances by the dancers of children.
(a) The stadium had many people on National Day. The school bands marched there. Many performances are done by children such as dances and singing.
(b) We watched the performances by the dancers of children.
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Hi,
Better.
I try:
The stadium had many people on National Day. The school bands marched there. Many performanceswere done by children, such as dances and singing. We watched the dancing.
Better.
I try:
The stadium had many people on National Day. The school bands marched there. Many performanceswere done by children, such as dances and singing. We watched the dancing.
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