Would anyone be kind enough to check the paragraph I rewrote as following. Is the underlined part acceptable?
All areas in the Puppetry Art Center are great. Among them, I love the Glove Puppet area the most because I’ve loved watching glove puppet shows since I was a child. In this area, I can try my hand with a glove puppet, so that I can satisfy my performance desire . Apart from this, the exhibition area throws light on the different forms of glove puppetry stages, the process of making puppet heads, their elaborately embroidered costumes, the instruments that are used backstage, and more. It leads me in an exploration of the world of puppets.
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