Percentage of tourists who visited Edinburgh attractions in Scotland

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The line graph compares the proportion of tourists visiting Edinburgh attractions in Scotland between 1980 and 2010. We can see that the most popular attractions in Scotland were castle and festival. Overall, in 1980, the least popular one was zoo but in 2010, this changed and aquarium was least popular.

From 1980 to 1995, castle sharply increased from 25% to 45%, but in 2010, the percentage of Castle dramatically went down to about 30%. Aquarium had a fluctuation between 1980 and 1990, then it increased noticebly from 20% to less than 10% and became the least attraction. Although zoo was the least attraction from 1980 to 2000, and remained slowly,zoo rose constantly and became the second least attraction. Festival unchanged and it was the third most popular one in Scotland.

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The line graph compares the proportion of tourists ~~visiting~~ who visited one of four ~~Edinburgh~~ attractions in Edinburgh, Scotland (the aquarium, the castle, the zoo and the festival) between 1980 and 2010.

Overall, we can see that, for most of that 30-year period, the most popular attractions in Scotland were the castle and the festival ~~. Overall, in 1980,~~ and the least popular one was the zoo. ~~but in 2010, this changed and aquarium was least popular.~~

From 1980 to 1995, visitors to the castle sharply increased from 25% to 45%, but in by [ 1] 2010, that ~~percentage of Castle~~ dramatically went down to about 30%. The graphs for the aquarium and the zoo followed the same pattern until 2000, rising for five years then falling for the following five. Both peaked in 1985, the aquarium’s at about 35% and the zoo’s at 15%. After 2000, the percentage of visitors to the zoo rose gradually to reach 20% in 2000, whereas the that for the aquarium ~~had a fluctuation between 1980 and 1990, then it~~ increased [ 2] decreased ~~noticebly from 20%~~ to less than 10% and became the least popular attraction by 2010.

~~Although zoo was the least attraction from 1980 to 2000, and remained slowly,zoo rose constantly and became the second least attraction.~~

Finally, the festival was the second-most popular tourist attraction in Edinburgh throughout that period, and its unremarkable graph remained mostly unchanged. It started at 30% in 1985, dipped gradually to approximately 24% fifteen years later, and then rose slowly to about 27% by 2010. ~~for most of~~ and it was the [ 3] ~~third most popular one in Scotland.~~

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[ 1]: “by” means: over a period of time up to that date.

[ 2]: That kind of careless mistake (increased) can cost you valuable marks in an exam. ALWAYS go over your own work before you submit it.

[ ]: That (third) was another mistake.

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