People, please give comments for my essay

0 This is an exercise of IELTS Task 2 that I'm studying. Hope you will help me to improve it. 02br
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00With the rapid development of information of technology in the recent decays, every areas of entertainment have been changing day by day. One of the most interesting hi-tech industry that people likes is games. So playing games is good? 02br
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00If we look around you will see that people plays games everywhere, every time such as on streets, in game centers, in parks, at homes and even in schools or offices. With the high technologies, people can enjoy the games in their mobile phones, their PDAs – Personal Digital Assistant, their computers or on some special game consoles. So that we must admit that games is very popular today. With the joining of corporations which lead the world in information technology such as SONY, Microsoft, and billions of dollars investigating for this area, game industry has been becoming more “reality” to our life. Games are divided into many different types, for example: education, real-time, role-playing. People can always find games that match to them. For example a person wants to become a pilot, he can play a game that simulates the flying, and he can control the plan with emulated situations that happen in real life. So he can learn much useful information by playing games. 02br
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00However, spending too much time playing games is not good. It also means there is no time for other activities. Especially children, they will have no time for doing their homework. Moreover, all day sitting in front of the computers may cause problems for health. 02br
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00In summary, I strongly agree with the statement. Everything always has both sides: positive and negative, and it all depending on us. Playing games is only useful for a person if he can manage his time sensibly. 0-