I am trying to write the quetions for personal statement introduction peer feedback sheets? If you have any problems , can I have your comments?
1. Does the writer start the introduction with an interesting opening statment?(or does the introduction grab reader's attention?) If not, how do you think the writer change his/her opening statement?
2. Does the introduction show the writer's current interests?
3. Does the writer show what motivated him/her to study the course of his/her interests?
4. Do you think the length of an introduction is appropriate?
5. Are there any sentence whose meaning is not clear to you in the introduction?
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