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Akka36 Posted 13 years ago
Letter Writing

Pay Rise Request/ Help me

Hello! Could anyone take a look at my short pay rise request, please?
Does it sound natural, appropriate?

"Dear Mr...,
I express my general satisfaction in the position I currently hold, however, I would like to kindly ask you to consider increase of my remuneration.
I have been your employee for many years. I have always performed my duties diligently and I am responsible and reliable person that you can always count on. Also, I would like to draw your attention to the fact that I am always available. I would be grateful if you could consider my request positively.
I look forward to receiving your reply.

Thank you.

Sincerely,

..."
  

Top answer

, I would like to ask you to consider a salary increase for me. I enjoy my work, and I have been your employee for many years now. I have always performed my duties diligently.

  • , I would like to ask you to consider a salary increase for me.
  • I enjoy my work, and I have been your employee for many years now.
  • I have always performed my duties diligently.
  • I am a responsible person that you can always rely on and have always made myself available.
  • I would be grateful if you could consider my request.
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Dear Mr...,

I would like to ask you to consider a salary increase for me. I enjoy my work, and I have been your employee for many years now. I have always performed my duties diligently. I am a responsible person that you can always rely on and have always made myself available.

I would be grateful if you could consider my request. I look forward to receiving

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