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Mezzopiano Posted 8 years ago
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Pay my tuition

Hi, could you correct this draft of email for me? Thank you.

Dear Ms. X,

My name is Y, I have a question to ask you about tuition. Is there any discount if I pay my tuition for the Fall 2018 early?

Thank you,

Y,

  

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Dear Ms. X, My name is Y, <<< Don't say this. English speakers auomatically look at the end to find your name.

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  • Dear Ms.
  • X, My name is Y, <<< Don't say this.
  • English speakers auomatically look at the end to find your name.
  • I have a question to ask you about tuition.
  • Is there any discount if I pay my tuition for the Fall 2018 early?
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Dear Ms. X,

My name is Y, <<< Don't say this. English speakers auomatically look at the end to find your name.

I have a question to ask you about tuition. Is there any discount if I pay my tuition for the Fall 2018 early?

Thank you,

Y,

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