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Soheil1 Posted 13 years ago
Vocabulary

Patronizer

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Have I used 'patronizer' correctly in
According to the existing sources on the sociocultural history as well as the history of Qajar art, Fath Ali Shah were a literature-patronizer and art-lover king.

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Clumsy, and not quite correct grammar. I suggest this. According to the existing sources on sociocultural history as well as the history of Qajar art, King Fath Ali Shah was a patron of literature and a lover of art.

— Clive

  • Clumsy, and not quite correct grammar.
  • I suggest this.
  • According to the existing sources on sociocultural history as well as the history of Qajar art, King Fath Ali Shah was a patron of literature and a lover of art.
  • Clive
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Clumsy, and not quite correct grammar.

I suggest this.
According to the existing sources on sociocultural history as well as the history of Qajar art, King Fath Ali Shah was a patron of literature and a lover of art.

Clive
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