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Anon512 Posted 12 years ago
Grammar

Past Tense

Below is a short paragraph which is I created using Simple Past Tense type.
Correct me if were wrong. Thank you in advance.

Two weeks ago, I went to a bookstore nearby my house with my sister.
I was informed by my friend that the bookstore is having great sale with incredible price for any kind of books. I was so excited to hear this great news. The next Sunday morning I was rushed to the bookstore with my sister. I was so delighted because I found so many books I've been looking for and the price was very cheap.
  

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Two weeks ago, I went to a bookstore near by my house with my sister. I was informed by my friend that the bookstore was having a great sale with incredible price s for all kind s of books. I was so excited to hear this great news.

  • Two weeks ago, I went to a bookstore near by my house with my sister.
  • I was informed by my friend that the bookstore was having a great sale with incredible price s for all kind s of books.
  • I was so excited to hear this great news.
  • The next Sunday morning I was rushed to the bookstore with my sister.
  • I was so delighted because I found so many books I've been looking for and the price was very cheap.
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Two weeks ago, I went to a bookstore nearby my house with my sister.
I was informed by my friend that the bookstore was having a great sale with incredible prices for all kinds of books. I was so excited to hear this great news. The next Sunday morning I was rushed to the bookstore with my sister. I was so delighted because I found so ma
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Thank you so much...
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No problem. Emotion: smile Keep up the good work!

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