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Mancunian Posted 18 years ago
Grammar

past tense

Please correct my sentence : 
"Thanks once again, your feedback had helped me a great deal."
or does this sound better? : "Thanks once again, your feedback helped me a great deal."
(the feedback i am writing about had an influence on my current work)
thanks
  

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HI mancunian, and welcome to English Forums. " or does this sound better? " (the feedback i am writing about had an influence on my current work) thanks You've missed an option: "Thanks once again .

  • HI mancunian, and welcome to English Forums.
  • " or does this sound better?
  • " (the feedback i am writing about had an influence on my current work) thanks You've missed an option: "Thanks once again .
  • " That seems your best choice, since the influence continues to your current work.
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HI mancunian, and welcome to English Forums.
mancunian
"Thanks once again, your feedback had helped me a great deal."

or does this sound better? : "Thanks once again, your feedback helped me a great deal."

(the feedback i am writing about had an influence on my current work)

thanks

You've missed an option:

"Thanks
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Hi Grammar Geek,
Thanks for swift answer and welcoming me to the community Emotion: smile
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Hi,

Just an aside - your two original options are examples of the "grammatical error" known as a "comma splice," in which the two separate sentences (GG's example) are joined together by a comma alone, instead of a comma and a conjunction. (Actually, in this case there's no appropriate conjunction, so you must use two separate sentences - or possibly a semi colon.)

- A.
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I corrected that by placing the period and the required capital letter to start the second sentence in bold. I don't see what you mean about my example showing them being joned by a comma.
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Hi, GG. Sorry for the misunderstanding. I didn't mean to give the impression that I was correcting your work. I meant to address my comment to the OP. I meant that your correction showed them correctly as two separate sentences.

I was just afraid he might have missed it, since you also included another correction at the same time, and didn't

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