Hello, I would like to know whether the sentence below makes sense to a native speaker:
"In fact, according to a 2014 Eurobarometer survey, 49 % of Czechs had crossed the EU border at least once in their life, as opposed to Italy with 37 % and Spain with 29 %."
I used the past perfect tense since I feel the people had traveled before the survey was conducted. But is it correct? Does it sound natural? Any suggestions?
Thank you in advance.
Yes Past Perfect sounds OK here. I'd also revise the sentence structure, as shown in bold. "In fact, according to a 2014 Eurobarometer survey, 49 % of Czechs had crossed the EU border at least once in their life, as opposed to 37 % of Italians and 29% o f Spaniards.
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Yes Past Perfect sounds OK here.
I'd also revise the sentence structure, as shown in bold.
"In fact, according to a 2014 Eurobarometer survey, 49 % of Czechs had crossed the EU border at least once in their life, as opposed to 37 % of Italians and 29% of Spaniards."
Clive