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LeGion12359 Posted 11 years ago
Grammar

Past perfect- Past simple

I wasn't hungry when I came home from school. I had eaten on my way home from school.
Can I say the above sentence thus without changing its meaning:
I wasn't hungry when I came home from school. I already ate on my way home from school?
  

Top answer

There are two sentences. The first expresses the fact and the second gives the reason. Yes, your changing of the tense is OK.

  • There are two sentences.
  • The first expresses the fact and the second gives the reason.
  • Yes, your changing of the tense is OK.
  • A third way might be: When I arrived home from school, I wasn’t hungry.
  • I had eaten on my way home.
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There are two sentences. The first expresses the fact and the second gives the reason.
Yes, your changing of the tense is OK.
A third way might be:
When I arrived home from school, I wasn’t hungry. I had eaten on my way home.
or
Upon coming home from school, I found I was not hungry; because I already ate on the way.
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LeGion12359I wasn't hungry when I came home from school. I already ate on my way home from school?
That one is not natural in BrE. We would use the past perfect there.
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wilpeterWhen I arrived home from school, I wasn’t hungry. I had eaten on my way home.
This is better because, the word "school" was used more than once in the question and was therefore, repetitive.
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wilpeter because I already ate on the way.
Although I listed it as a suggestion, I didn't weight the choices. I personally avoid using "ate" by itself in a sentence; however, I do sometime use "because I already ate dinner on the way."
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wilpeterI personally avoid using "ate" by itself in a sentence; however, I do sometime use "because I already ate dinner on the way."
My understanding is that this is perfectly natural in NAmE.

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