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Silak12 Posted 12 years ago
Grammar
Past perfect?
HI! everyone.
Could you rectify and shorten this sentence?
"When I lose something due to my carelessness I regret deeply, not because of the material value of that thing. Rather because of the toil my father had done to earn the money that thing had been bought with "
Could you tell me whether the past perfect(orange) correct there? And also could you shorten the above sentence for me?
Thanks!
Could you rectify and shorten this sentence?
"When I lose something due to my carelessness I regret deeply, not because of the material value of that thing. Rather because of the toil my father had done to earn the money that thing had been bought with "
Could you tell me whether the past perfect(orange) correct there? And also could you shorten the above sentence for me?
Thanks!
Top answer
When I lose something through carelessness, I regret it deeply, not because of its material value , but r ather because of the work my father did to earn the money that paid for it.
- When I lose something through carelessness, I regret it deeply, not because of its material value , but r ather because of the work my father did to earn the money that paid for it.
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When I lose something through carelessness, I regret it deeply, not because of its material value, but rather because of the work my father did to earn the money that paid for it.
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Mister Micawber............. my father did to earn the money that paid for it.Thanks for answering sir.
Does "that" in the above quote refer to money or the father?
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