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Pokh Posted 15 years ago
Grammar

Past Perfect

Haji Jalil was captured in 2003 after an Afghan intelligence official said he had taken an “active part” in an ambush that killed American soldiers.

http://www.nytimes.com/2011/04/26/opinion/26tue1.html?ref=opinion

Guys,Just a quick question...
Is past perfect really necessary here? Is Time indicator after not sufficient to indicate CAPTURE happened after TAKING PART... ?

Am I missing sth?
  

Top answer

HJ was captured ... after an ... official said he took an "active part" in an ambush ....

  • HJ was captured ...
  • after an ...
  • official said he took an "active part" in an ambush ....
  • OK.
  • had taken is more formal, and therefore probably more appropriate in a news article.
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HJ was captured ... after an ... official said he took an "active part" in an ambush .... OK.

had taken is more formal, and therefore probably more appropriate in a news article.

took is more likely to be heard in an ordinary everyday conversation.

CJ

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