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Anonymous Posted 9 years ago
Grammar

passive voice

Hi! I wrote a sentence and am not sure if it is grammatically correct or not.

However, a number of studies have shown that 65% of the gym memberships have been cancelled after 3 months since 2002 in the UK where building sports facilities were the government policy for the last two decades.


and can I use 'was cancelled' instead of 'have been cancelled' in the sentence?

any help is appreciated, thank you!
  

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Anonymous However, a number of studies have shown that 65% of ( the ) gym memberships have been cancelled after 3 months since 2002 in the UK where building sports facilities were ( the ) government policy for the last two decades. Grammatically correct as written; however, I would omit the optional the s. Anonymous can I use 'was cancelled' instead of 'have been cancelled' in the sentence?

  • Anonymous However, a number of studies have shown that 65% of ( the ) gym memberships have been cancelled after 3 months since 2002 in the UK where building sports facilities were ( the ) government policy for the last two decades.
  • Grammatically correct as written; however, I would omit the optional the s.
  • Anonymous can I use 'was cancelled' instead of 'have been cancelled' in the sentence?
  • No.
  • Use ' were cancelled' if you want to make that substitution.
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AnonymousHowever, a number of studies have shown that 65% of (the) gym memberships have been cancelled after 3 months since 2002 in the UK where building sports facilities were (the) government policy for the last two decades.

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