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Contiluo Posted 13 years ago
Vocabulary
passion for food
Please help me correct the following paragraph. Thanks!
I love cooking. Nothing gives me more pure happiness than to pick out a recipe, get the best ingredients, try making it, and then enjoying the results. When I was little, I used to watch in amazement as my grandmother prepared delicious meals almost without effort, so I suppose it was under her influence that I eventually took up cooking as a hobby. I find fulfillment in cooking for loved ones because seeing their happiness when they enjoy something. Therefore, my dream in the future is to be a professional chef that can ignite my passion for food.
I love cooking. Nothing gives me more pure happiness than to pick out a recipe, get the best ingredients, try making it, and then enjoying the results. When I was little, I used to watch in amazement as my grandmother prepared delicious meals almost without effort, so I suppose it was under her influence that I eventually took up cooking as a hobby. I find fulfillment in cooking for loved ones because seeing their happiness when they enjoy something. Therefore, my dream in the future is to be a professional chef that can ignite my passion for food.
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I love cooking. Nothing gives me more pure happiness than to pick ing out a recipe, get ting the best ingredients, try ing to mak e it, and then enjoying the results. When I was little, I used to watch in amazement as my grandmother prepared delicious meals almost without effort , so I suppose (it is not grammatically incorrect; it just drags on) I t was under her influence that I eventually took up cooking as a hobby.
- I love cooking.
- Nothing gives me more pure happiness than to pick ing out a recipe, get ting the best ingredients, try ing to mak e it, and then enjoying the results.
- When I was little, I used to watch in amazement as my grandmother prepared delicious meals almost without effort , so I suppose (it is not grammatically incorrect; it just drags on) I t was under her influence that I eventually took up cooking as a hobby.
- I find fulfillment in cooking for loved ones because seeing their happiness when they enjoy something .
- (you should rephrase this part of the sentence) Therefore, my dream in the future is to be a professional chef that can ignite my passion for food.
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I love cooking. Nothing gives me more pure happiness than to picking out a recipe, getting the best ingredients, trying to make it, and then enjoying the results. When I was little, I used to watch in amazement as my grandmother prepared delicious meals almost without effort, so I suppose (it is not grammatically incorrect; it just drags
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