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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
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By 1463 DR, four of the members of the group of adventurers known as the Companions of the Hall had died and had their souls taken to the magical forest of Iruladoon. These fallen friends were the former dwarf king Bruenor Battlehammer, the halfling Regis, the barbarian warrior Wulfgar, and Catti-brie, a Chosen of Mielikki and a beginner wizard. During that year, the four companions were given a choice by the goddess Mielikki, the Forest Queen.
By 1463 DR, four of the members of the group of adventurers known as the Companions of the Hall had died and had their souls taken to the magical forest of Iruladoon. These fallen friends were the former dwarf king Bruenor Battlehammer, the halfling Regis, the barbarian warrior Wulfgar, and Catti-brie, a Chosen of Mielikki and a beginner wizard. During that year, the four companions were given a choice by the goddess Mielikki, the Forest Queen.
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but remember to keep your posts to specific questions, please.
- but remember to keep your posts to specific questions, please.
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No problem...but remember to keep your posts to specific questions, please.
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