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Yoong Liat Posted 19 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Passage for Year 2 students

0 01b00This passage is meant for Year 2 students. Could someone please edit it for me? Any suggestions to improve the passage are welcome. Thanks in advance.02b02br
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00Ricky was walking to the playground when he saw a coin on the ground. He picked it up and saw that there was a blue spot on it. He wanted to return it to the owner but there was no one around. 02br
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00As he was walking home, he saw a beggar, so he dropped the coin into his bowl. The beggar said, “Thank you, little boy.” 02br
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00The next day, Ricky’s mother asked him to buy some cans of food. He went to the provision shop. He asked the shopkeeper, “How much do they cost?” “Six dollars,’ said the shopkeeper. Ricky gave him ten dollars and the shopkeeper gave him four dollars in coins as change. 02br
00Ricky looked at one of the coins carefully. To his surprise, it was the coin with a blue spot, which he had given to the beggar. He decided to keep it because he believed that it was a lucky coin.0-
  

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0Ricky was walking to the playground when he saw a coin on the ground. He picked it up and 01b 00noticed02b 00 that there was a blue spot on it. He wanted to return it to the owner but there was no one 01b 00nearby02b 00.

  • 0Ricky was walking to the playground when he saw a coin on the ground.
  • He picked it up and 01b 00noticed02b 00 that there was a blue spot on it.
  • He wanted to return it to the owner but there was no one 01b 00nearby02b 00.
  • 02br 02br 00As he was walking home, he saw a beggar, so he dropped the coin into his bowl.
  • ” 02br 02br 00The next day, Ricky’s mother asked him to buy some cans of food.
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0Ricky was walking to the playground when he saw a coin on the ground. He picked it up and 01b00noticed02b00 that there was a blue spot on it. He wanted to return it to the owner but there was no one 01b00nearby02b00. 02br
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00As he was walking home, he saw a beggar, so he dropped the coin into his bowl. The beggar said, “0
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0 01font00Thanks, Mister Micawber, for editing the passage. 02br
00In Singapore one-dollar coins are common, and it is common for a can of food to cost two dollars.02br
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