Could you check these?
(A) Compared with those who read books on their smartphones and computers, those who read paper books are more eager to try anything and better at looking at things from different points of view.
(B) Paper books make it easier than e-books to get the whole idea of what is written and go back and forth between the pages.
(C) Paper books are a better choice if you try to stay focused, remember things well, and take your time to think.
teacherJapan (A) Compared with those who read books on their smartphones and computers, those who read paper books are more eager to try anything and are better at looking at things from different points of view. It's poor style to repeat "those". Say what it refers to instead of one of them.
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teacherJapan(A) Compared with those who read books on their smartphones and computers, those who read paper books are more eager to try anything and are better at looking at things from different points of view.
It's poor style to repeat "those". Say what it refers to instead of one of them. \