Hi I think it looks better with the second pronoun referring to the cards; and with the future for "win" instead of the "-ing" ending Also, you would add to the cards (but the "in" is good). So... - If the cards you're holding don't look like they'll win the game, pass on your turn and keep adding to them.
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