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Moon7296 Posted 12 years ago
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participle sentence(phrasing)
1. A great number of people can(could?) be
more literate and well-rounded if television would broadcast many educational programs. The rate of people watching television differing from states to states, or from countries to countries, in general, a lot of people watch television worldwide.
2. A great number of people can be
more literate and well-rounded if television broadcasts many educational programs. The rate of people watching television differ from state to state and country to country in general, a lot of people watch television worldwide.
Q) The first underlined part in #1 means although the rate of people watching television differ from ....
I tried to make a participle sentence. Does it sound Okay? or should it be just phrased like in #2 or some other way?
more literate and well-rounded if television would broadcast many educational programs. The rate of people watching television differing from states to states, or from countries to countries, in general, a lot of people watch television worldwide.
2. A great number of people can be
more literate and well-rounded if television broadcasts many educational programs. The rate of people watching television differ from state to state and country to country in general, a lot of people watch television worldwide.
Q) The first underlined part in #1 means although the rate of people watching television differ from ....
I tried to make a participle sentence. Does it sound Okay? or should it be just phrased like in #2 or some other way?
Top answer
There is no such thing as 'the rate of people'. And there are other problems. You need to recast.
- There is no such thing as 'the rate of people'.
- And there are other problems.
- You need to recast.
- People can become more literate and well-rounded if television broadc asts educational programs.
- The number of TV viewers varies from state to state and from country to country, bu t worldwide, many people watch television .
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There is no such thing as 'the rate of people'. And there are other problems. You need to recast.
People can become more literate and well-rounded if television broadcasts educational programs. The number of TV viewers varies from state to state and from country to country, but worldwide, many people watch television.
People can become more literate and well-rounded if television broadcasts educational programs. The number of TV viewers varies from state to state and from country to country, but worldwide, many people watch television.
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