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Pokh Posted 15 years ago
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Participle phrase

In the past several years, astronomers have detected more than 80 massive planets, most of them at least as large as Jupiter, circling other stars.

What does circling other stars. modify ? should n't it modify verb have detected? if so would n't this sentence be illogical.but according to my book it s correct.. Please help me?

2. In the past several years, astronomers have detected more than 80 massive planets, mostly at least as large as Jupiter, which circle other stars.

Why is above sentence incorrect ??
  

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Hi, In the past several years, astronomers have detected more than 80 massive planets, most of them at least as large as Jupiter, circling other stars. What does circling other stars. modify ?

  • Hi, In the past several years, astronomers have detected more than 80 massive planets, most of them at least as large as Jupiter, circling other stars.
  • What does circling other stars.
  • modify ?
  • It describes 'planets'.
  • should n't it modify verb have detected?
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Hi,
In the past several years, astronomers have detected more than 80 massive planets, most of them at least as large as Jupiter, circling other stars.

What does circling other stars. modify ? It describes 'planets'.

should n't it modify verb have detected? if so wou
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Thanks for reply Clive..

What does circling other stars. modify ? It describes 'planets'.

circling other stars is a participle modifier thus to my understanding any -ing modifier preceded by comma is an adverbial modifier and should modify the action of the previous clause... Is my understanding wrong.. Can you please elaborate further... there is whole bunch of word
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Hi,

In the past several years, astronomers have detected more than 80 massive planets, most of them at least as large as Jupiter, circling other stars.

What does circling other stars. modify ? It describes 'planets'.

circlin
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Clive 2. In the past several years, astronomers have detected more than 80 massive planets, mostly at least as large as Jupiter, which circle other stars.Why is above sentence incorrect ?? It's not incorrect.In this sentence It seems like which .. is modifying Jupiter... Can you please elaborate why its correct... The verb 'circl
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Hi,

What would you like to know apart from what I explained in my last post?

Clive
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Sentence one uses most of them at least as large as Jupiter ; Sentence 2 uses mostly at least as large as Jupiter; Is there any difference?

Thank you
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Hi,

1. In the past several years, astronomers have detected more than 80 massive planets, most of them at least as large as Jupiter, circling other stars.

2. In the past several years, astronomers have detected more than 80 massive planets, mostly at least as large as Jupiter, which circle other stars.
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I thought mostly at least as large as Jupiter as an adverbial modifier (which I believe modifiers have detected) ;most of them at least as large as is adjectival modifier and is attached to planets..If so will it not change the meaning.. or is my analysis wrong?

Thank you
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Hi,

I thought mostly at least as large as Jupiter as an adverbial modifier (which I believe modifiers have detected) ;most of them at least as large as is adjectival modifier and is attached to planets..If so will it not change the meaning.. or is my analysis wrong?

Let's consider simpler examples.
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CliveLet's consider simpler examples.
A. Mary bought 15 sweaters, mostly large.
B. Mary bought 15 sweaters, most of them large.

I see both of the final phrases as adjectival, describing 'sweaters'. The word 'mostly' is an adverb modifying the adjective 'red'.

Clive

Thanks clive,

In first sentence we got adverb as a headword

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