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Lucas21c Posted 14 years ago
Grammar

Participial construction

Could you check whether the following sentence is fine?
Thank you.

When the disable in wheelchairs attend an exhibition, organizers allow him to receive priority entrance right away and other visitors also try to help him making way for him.
  

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When the disabled in wheelchairs attend an exhibition the organizers allow them to receive priority entrance right away and other visitors also try to help him make way for them .

— MalRey

  • When the disabled in wheelchairs attend an exhibition the organizers allow them to receive priority entrance right away and other visitors also try to help him make way for them .
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When the disabled in wheelchairs attend an exhibition the organizers allow them to receive priority entrance right away and other visitors also try to help him make way for them.
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Can I put 'immediately' in between 'wheelchairs' and 'attend?'
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lucas21cCan I put 'immediately' in between 'wheelchairs' and 'attend?'
No, and even if you could what would be the point?
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I most respectfully suggest something like:

When the disabled attend an exhibition, organizers allow them to receive priority entrance, and other visitors also help

by making way for them.
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