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Eff Posted 17 years ago
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Participation X participating

Hi all,
Could anyone check this sentence? I´m not sure if it´s correct. Thank you.

To make the itinerary unique, I added the possibility of playing golf, dancing traditional Scottish dances and participating in the Highland Games in North Berwick.

(I´m creating an itinerary of a tour over Scotland...)
  

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It looks all right to me. CB

  • It looks all right to me.
  • CB
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It looks all right to me.

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EffTo make the itinerary unique, I added the possibility of playing golf, dancing traditional Scottish dances and participating in the Highland Games in North Berwick.
I see nothing wrong in it, but have you considered: "

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