0
Lê Thiên Hoàng Posted 10 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

[part two] A short story; can everyone please fix my errors?

The film revolves about close friends story, Alex and Rosie. They had shared their sad and happy of things when they were seven years old. They were hoping that would be married later but when they grown up and then through the ups and downs. In the end, They are in turn have their own families. The hoping had broken between their.
  

Top answer

Lê Thiên Hoàng The film revolves about around close friend s, story, Alex and Rosie. They had shared their sad and happy times since their childhood. of things when they were seven years old.

— Teechr

  • Lê Thiên Hoàng The film revolves about around close friend s, story, Alex and Rosie.
  • They had shared their sad and happy times since their childhood.
  • of things when they were seven years old.
  • They were hoping to get that would be married late r, but when they grown grew up they went their separate ways , and eventually got married to other people.
  • then through the ups and downs.
Free · every Monday

Get the Weekly English Kit 📬

New words, one handy idiom, and a 2-minute quiz — delivered to your inbox to keep your streak alive.

5 Answers
0
Lê Thiên HoàngThe film revolves about around close friends, story, Alex and Rosie. They had shared their sad and happy times since their childhood. of things when they were seven years old. They were hoping to get that would be married later, but when they grown grew up the
0
0
So, Do I write true sentences(about gammar) in a short story? Or wrong( I know that it's not good writing).

They were hoping to get that would be married later, but when they grown grewup they went their separate ways, and eventually got married to other people. then through the ups and downs. In the end, They are in turn have
0
0
I don't understand what you mean. If you're asking whether you should write grammatical sentences in a short story, then the answer is yes; of course you should!
0
0
- They were hoping that would be married later.
- They are in turn have their own families.
-The hoping had broken between their.
0
0
Those are all ungrammatical.
0

Related Questions