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Hungry Posted 19 years ago
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Part of Resume (Objective)
Are there any mistakes in the Objective below??
To vie with further growing challenges in this generation in a challenging and learning environment that enhances my skills with full potential for achieving company’s goal and to determine the best utilization of the creativity within me.
To vie with further growing challenges in this generation in a challenging and learning environment that enhances my skills with full potential for achieving company’s goal and to determine the best utilization of the creativity within me.
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It sounds pretentious to the point of meaninglessness; no HR manager is going to try to wade through that gobbledegook. Try something simpler: To challenge myself in an environment that enhances my skills and best uses my creativity to achieve company and personal goals.
- It sounds pretentious to the point of meaninglessness; no HR manager is going to try to wade through that gobbledegook.
- Try something simpler: To challenge myself in an environment that enhances my skills and best uses my creativity to achieve company and personal goals.
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It sounds pretentious to the point of meaninglessness; no HR manager is going to try to wade through that gobbledegook. Try something simpler:
To challenge myself in an environment that enhances my skills and best uses my creativity to achieve company and personal goals.
To challenge myself in an environment that enhances my skills and best uses my creativity to achieve company and personal goals.
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