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Strella Posted 15 years ago
Letter Writing

Part of cover letter please help make it up

When I found out …. university will have English preparation courses I found this situation as an opportunity to take English course in germany in …. university to rich my desired ielts grade in place and while taking English courses overthere I can get familiar with the environment of … university and your countries culture and it will make me much ready to start management course.
  

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Hi, This needs work. I suggest you start by breaking this long sentence up into two or more shorter ones. Then repost if you want us to look again.

— Clive

  • Hi, This needs work.
  • I suggest you start by breaking this long sentence up into two or more shorter ones.
  • Then repost if you want us to look again.
  • IELTS G ermany Clive
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Hi,

This needs work. I suggest you start by breaking this long sentence up into two or more shorter ones. Then repost if you want us to look again.

IELTS Germany

Clive
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