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Hoang lethien Posted 10 years ago
Grammar

[part 8] please to underline these incorrect sentences.

  • Always use the social networking in midnight, It will made you get trouble sleeping.
  • If you have not enough sleeping that you will get tired in all day.
  • The social networking bring people be closer; but It can create a distance between couples.
  • You spend a lot of time to use facebook.
  • Apple have been got 68% of revenues from Iphone selling.
  • Faithful users who are using Iphone; but Apple is still fierce competition in the premium of smartphones.
Thanks.
P/S : I translate these sentences from vietnamese.
  

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I guess it should be like this ; 1) Never use social networking at night. It will not give you trouble sleeping. 2) If you do not get enough sleep.

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  • I guess it should be like this ; 1) Never use social networking at night.
  • It will not give you trouble sleeping.
  • 2) If you do not get enough sleep.
  • you will be tired the next day.
  • 3)Social networking sites do bring people closer, but it also creates distance between couples.
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I guess it should be like this ;
1) Never use social networking at night. It will not give you trouble sleeping.
2) If you do not get enough sleep. you will be tired the next day.
3)Social networking sites do bring people closer, but it also creates distance between couples.
4) People are addicted and spend a lot of time on Facebook.
5) Apple has got 68% revenue just by
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Why do you use "do" for this sentence? do bring people closer....
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It is not necessary to use " do " but i used it beacuse it would heighten the effect. Also the next line, "but it creates distances between couples" is the opposite.
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