Part 6 please check the grammer

I would like it to sound biblical and spirtual, if you find any mistakes kindly let me know. thanks for helping

1. Be a righteous man, rest! stop!

2. How long you be twisted, how long will you go around in circles

3. You know, nothing will help

4. you have to go through this pain

5. No one is urging me anymore. why have you stopped?

6. My nights no longer come to claim their affront

7. How can I escape from you, where would I make off

8. A righteous man in his death is still alive, I am already dead in my life

Questions.

6. is writing that way it's correct?
7. make off- run away, is it ok to use "make off"?