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Anonymous Posted 8 years ago
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Part 3 please check the grammer

I would like it to sound very poemic. thanks for helping.


1. How he is pacing gently, proudly

2. Getting drunk, spinning around from the voices of the crowd

3. They call him the righteous man, Blessed is the righteous man


Question.

1. I wonder if it's more correct to use "paces" (walking) ?


If you see any mistakes, kindly let me know. thanks.

  

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It is poetic, not poemic.

  • It is poetic, not poemic.
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It is poetic, not poemic.
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2. Spinning around, drunken with the voices of the crowd

3. They call him the righteous man, Blessed be the righteous man

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