Part 2 - please check the grammer

I would like it to sound very poemic.

I will try to explain the meaning of the words as well, if you think the choice of a certain tense is wrong, kindly let me know. thank you. lines must be not too long. I will be happy if the meaning will be closed as to the one that I try to describe here

Part 2

1.A vessel holding a blessing is the peace, but there is no peace in yourself

a vessel, imagine something very spritual, so there is a tool "holding" blessing of peace.
Does choosing vessel is ok in order to describe something spirtual like this?

but there is no peace in yourself or but there is no peace inside yourself?

2. Do not turn the Torah to be a hatchet, a dagger the the sword of your Torah

Torah is the Jewish bible. It's more correct to write- Do not turn the torah into a hatchet?

3. Slight as severe, Tired, struggling

If I want to write the opposite of severe, what is a more poetic word in English for that, instead of "easy"?
Tired. is it more right to write- being tired?

4. Your teachings are orderly and clear, (but) chametz (bread) is in the rooms.