Part 1 please check the grammer

I would like it to sound very poemic.

I will try to explain the meaning of the words as well, if you think the choice of a certain tense is wrong, kindly let me know. thank you. lines must be not too long. I will be happy if the meaning will be closed as to the one that I try to describe here

Part 1

1.You talk about faith, but you are all gripped with nature (a man feels very connected to nature it became part of his soul)

maybe embedded is better than gripped? the connection between the man and nature should be descrive as very strong connection.

2. Feel for the sorrow of the Divine spirit (When someone want to 'feel' the pain for somebody else, here the man feel 'pain' for the divine spirit

3. From your sorrow you're not moving even for a moment (the man always feel sorrow, and doesn't stop to feel sorrow even for one moment.)

4.How will you sell them joy, when you are one of the saddest men in town?

5. "How important is an open heart", you say, but your heart to another you will not betray
For important heart, it's something like to be very honest, but the line must use "heart" thanks.

but your heart to another you will not betray- you will never let others know how you really feel.