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Anonymous Posted 17 years ago
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Parole board

i am needing help with a letter to the board of pardons, for my son who was sentenced to [year] rehearing, but with the condissions the board set for him, of things he was to complete for him to be released, [name] completed they successfully, without any write ups and he has been there for two years now at the [State] state prison. He was charged with [offence X] which was reduced to [offence Y], and he has done everthing he can with this time to better himself,and grow up. the caseworker and theripis are putting in for a special, which is going to ask for a earlier date for a hearing or release,and as his mother i would like to write a letter as well, but mine always turn inti a novel before i get what i have to say written down. please help me. as you can see my sentences tend to run on forever. thank you for any help offered.

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Hello Anon, Unfortunately we're not able to help with the text itself, in cases with a legal dimension. But maybe the caseworker would be in a position to proof-read it for you; or perhaps members will be able to add general tips on composing a letter. With best wishes, MrP

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  • Hello Anon, Unfortunately we're not able to help with the text itself, in cases with a legal dimension.
  • But maybe the caseworker would be in a position to proof-read it for you; or perhaps members will be able to add general tips on composing a letter.
  • With best wishes, MrP
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Hello Anon,

Unfortunately we're not able to help with the text itself, in cases with a legal dimension.

But maybe the caseworker would be in a position to proof-read it for you; or perhaps members will be able to add general tips on composing a letter.

With best wishes,

MrP
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