Parenthetical sentence
Ben, wearing a suit he looks uncomfortable in / looking uncomfortable in a suit / looking uncomfortable in the suit he's wearing, sits nervously waiting outside a door.
Hi. How would you phrase the parenthetical sentence?
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anonymous Hi. How would you phrase the parenthetical sentence? Of the three, "looking uncomfortable in the suit he's wearing" is by far the best.
- anonymous Hi.
- How would you phrase the parenthetical sentence?
- Of the three, "looking uncomfortable in the suit he's wearing" is by far the best.
- On the other hand, there are two handy rules for fiction writing.
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anonymousHi. How would you phrase the parenthetical sentence?
Of the three, "looking uncomfortable in the suit he's wearing" is by far the best. On the other hand, there are two handy rules for fiction writing. One goes "Don't tell, show." The other is something like "Delete every adverb and adjective you can find and replace them with verbs." For an over-
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