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Sailsofoblivion Posted 11 years ago
Grammar

Parenthesis

Hi, just wondering, would this sentence read better if I used commas to parenthesize "with eyes full of tears"?

My mother noticed this, and with eyes full of tears said:
  

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In my view, yes.

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I, in contrast, would recommend removing the one comma you already have.

CJ
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