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Quaerereverum Posted 14 years ago
Vocabulary

Paraphrasing

Hello,

I've tried to paraphrase the sentence N#1 . Is my second sentence proper?

1. Second, the university sends out wrong signal to the outside community because those students who want to apply to the university may have second thoughts.

2. Second the university gives the wrong massage to the outside community because those students who want to apply to the university may change their decision.

Thank you in advance.
  

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1. Second, the university is sending out the wrong signal to the outside community because those students who want to apply to the university may have second thoughts. 2.

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  • Second, the university is sending out the wrong signal to the outside community because those students who want to apply to the university may have second thoughts.
  • 2.
  • Second , the university is sending the wrong message to the outside community because those students who want to apply to the university may decide not to do so.
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1. Second, the university is sending out the wrong signal to the outside community because those students who want to apply to the university may have second thoughts.

2. Second, the university is sending the wrong message to the outside community because those students who want to apply to the university may decide not to do so.
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