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If you see any mistakes, please correct me. Thanks in advance. 
original text: Peat is very buoyant and the central raised section which had been isolated by the fire, broke away from the rocky, basalt floor as the water level rose in winter.
( my paraphrasing)
Peat has a tendency to float on the surface of water. The ascended middle part of the peat got separated from other ones by the fire. It came away from the bottom of the floor with an increase in water level during the winter.
original text: Peat is very buoyant and the central raised section which had been isolated by the fire, broke away from the rocky, basalt floor as the water level rose in winter.
( my paraphrasing)
Peat has a tendency to float on the surface of water. The ascended middle part of the peat got separated from other ones by the fire. It came away from the bottom of the floor with an increase in water level during the winter.
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Hi, If you see any mistakes, please correct me. Thanks in advance. original text: Peat is very buoyant and the central raised section , which had been isolated by the fire, broke away from the rocky, basalt floor as the water level rose in winter.
- Hi, If you see any mistakes, please correct me.
- Thanks in advance.
- original text: Peat is very buoyant and the central raised section , which had been isolated by the fire, broke away from the rocky, basalt floor as the water level rose in winter.
- ( my paraphrasing) Peat has a tendency to float on the surface of water.
- The ascended middle part of the peat got separated from other ones by the fire.
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