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Adonis1013 Posted 16 years ago
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Could you help me check out these revised sentence? If you find anything worng with vocabualry and grammar, please correct them. Thank you very much.
1. The original sentence: Summers are hot and winters never get really cold, making Hong Kong a pleasant place to visit year round.
The sun is strong during summers and the winter’s temperature is not very low. That attracts many tourists to travel to at any time of the year.
People in speak Cantonese as their mother tongue. Besides it, most residents there can speak English.
Could you help me check out these revised sentence? If you find anything worng with vocabualry and grammar, please correct them. Thank you very much.
1. The original sentence: Summers are hot and winters never get really cold, making Hong Kong a pleasant place to visit year round.
The sun is strong during summers and the winter’s temperature is not very low. That attracts many tourists to travel to at any time of the year.
People in speak Cantonese as their mother tongue. Besides it, most residents there can speak English.
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Stick with the originals. The paraphrases are awkward and unnatural.
- Stick with the originals.
- The paraphrases are awkward and unnatural.
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Stick with the originals. The paraphrases are awkward and unnatural.
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