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00Hi, Could someone please look at the paraphrase for grammar mistakes?02b02br
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00Paraphrase (of the first three stanzas)02br
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00The poet walks the countryside alone imagining himself adrift. Then the reverie is broken by the sight of the daffodils caught in the gentle wind and the flowers appear to him to have taken on the form of lively dancers. This shock captures his spirits and he views the scene as a 'host', welcoming and uplifting01i
00.02i00 The daffodils seem to be as numerous as the stars that shine in the sky. They stretch endlessly along the shore, and though the waves of the lake dance beside the flowers, the daffodils overshadow the water in glee. The poet can’t help but be happy in such a joyful company of flowers. He stares and stares, but doesn’t realize what wealth the scene will bring him00. 02br
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00The Daffodils02b00 by 01a
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00I wandered lonely as a cloud02br
00That floats on high o'er vales and hills,02br
00When all at once I saw a crowd,02br
00A host, of golden daffodils;02br
00Beside the lake, beneath the trees,02br
00Fluttering and dancing in the breeze.02br
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00Continuous as the stars that shine02br
00And twinkle on the Milky Way,02br
00They stretched in never-ending line02br
00Along the margin of a bay:02br
00Ten thousand saw I at a glance,02br
00Tossing their heads in sprightly dance. 02br
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00The waves beside them danced, but they02br
00Out-did the sparkling waves in glee:02br
00A Poet could not but be gay,02br
00In such a jocund company:02br
00I gazed-01del
00and gazed02del00-but little thought02br
00What wealth the show to me had brought:02br
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00For oft, when on my couch I lie02br
00In vacant or in pensive mood,02br
00They flash upon that inward eye02br
00Which is the bliss of solitude;02br
00And then my heart with pleasure fills,02br
00And dances with the daffodils.0-