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IQCat Posted 12 years ago
Grammar

Parantheses

Hi, is the structure okay? I'm not sure about the order of the two insertions between commas.

"According to analysts, with its xyz solution, the company rolled out 1m workstation licences."
  

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" It's not clear. Did the company use its technology to deploy the workstation licenses? Or did the company include the licensed XYZ software in the million workstations that it deployed?

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  • " It's not clear.
  • Did the company use its technology to deploy the workstation licenses?
  • Or did the company include the licensed XYZ software in the million workstations that it deployed?
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IQCat"According to analysts, with its xyz solution, the company rolled out 1m workstation licences."
It's not clear. Did the company use its technology to deploy the workstation licenses? Or did the company include the licensed XYZ software in the million workstations that it deployed?
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I think the company sold its licensed software 1m times and the xyz solution is the brand of the software. That's how I've understood the original sentence.
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Then the sentence should be:

"According to analysts, the company sold 1 million workstation licences for its product: XYZ Solution."
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Thanks for your help.
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