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Anonymous Posted 7 years ago
Grammar

Paranormal Activity 3

Hi, is this grammatical correct?


In 1988 sisters Katie and Kristi seem to be enjoying a normal, happy childhood at home. But when strange things start going bump in the night, their father, a wedding videographer, decides to use his cameras to discover the source, especially since Kristi appears to having conversations with an imaginary friend. While the cameras do indeed reveal a flurry of supernatural occurrences, the family is unprepared for the terror that awaits.

  

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In 1988 sisters Katie and Kristi seem to be enjoying a normal, happy childhood at home. But when strange things start going bump in the night, their father, a wedding videographer, decides to use his cameras to discover the source, especially since Kristi appears to be having conversations with an imaginary friend. While the cameras do indeed reveal a flurry of supernatural occurrences, the family is unprepared for the terror that awaits.

  • In 1988 sisters Katie and Kristi seem to be enjoying a normal, happy childhood at home.
  • But when strange things start going bump in the night, their father, a wedding videographer, decides to use his cameras to discover the source, especially since Kristi appears to be having conversations with an imaginary friend.
  • While the cameras do indeed reveal a flurry of supernatural occurrences, the family is unprepared for the terror that awaits.
  • In strict grammar, don't start a sentence like #2 with 'But '.
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In 1988 sisters Katie and Kristi seem to be enjoying a normal, happy childhood at home. But when strange things start going bump in the night, their father, a wedding videographer, decides to use his cameras to discover the source, especially since Kristi appears to be having conversations with an imaginary friend. While the cameras do indeed reveal a flurry of supernatural occurrences,

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