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Cocoa Posted 12 years ago
Grammar
Parallelism and passive voice
Can I use parallelism and passive voice in a sentence like this?
"When the project is underway, all the procedures are executed, the results examined, the revises proposed, and the corrections achieved."
Thanks in advance
"When the project is underway, all the procedures are executed, the results examined, the revises proposed, and the corrections achieved."
Thanks in advance
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When the project is underway, all the procedures are executed, the results examined, the revisions proposed, and the corrections achieved. Cocoa Can I use parallelism and passive voice in a sentence like this? You can use parallel passive voice, but that particular sentence is weak and the vocabulary is non-native.
- When the project is underway, all the procedures are executed, the results examined, the revisions proposed, and the corrections achieved.
- Cocoa Can I use parallelism and passive voice in a sentence like this?
- You can use parallel passive voice, but that particular sentence is weak and the vocabulary is non-native.
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When the project is underway, all the procedures are executed, the results examined, the revisions proposed, and the corrections achieved.
CocoaCan I use parallelism and passive voice in a sentence like this?You can use parallel passive voice, but that particular sentence is weak and the vocabulary is non-native.
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