Hi, please help me to answer this question
Edit the following paragraph, combining sentences (3), (4), (5), and (6) into one sentence. Do so by reducing sentences (4), (5), and (6) to list and adding the list to sentence (2). Remember, your finished series should exhibit parallelism. Write the paragraph on the lines below.
(1)Oldies music stations play songs from the 50s, 60s, and 70s. (2) This music is a great hit with “baby boomers” and anyone else who used to listen to it. (3) These stations focus on playing music by the most popular performers. (4) They play tunes by the Beatles. (5) They play songs by Elvis. (6) They also play hits by the Supremes. (7) Even though music and the music industry have changed over the decades, stations that play oldies from the 50s, 60s, and 70s, are still popular in the new millennium.
Edited Paragraph
(1)Oldies music stations play songs from the 50s, 60s, and 70s. (2) This music is a great hit with “baby boomers” and anyone else who used to listen to it. (3) These stations focus on playing music by the most popular performers, they play tunes by the Beatles, songs by Elvis, and the Supremes. (7) Even though music and the music industry have changed over the decades, stations that play oldies from the 50s, 60s, and 70s, are still popular in the new millennium.
Is that true or false? Thank you for helping me
angel capri (3) These stations focus on playing music by the most popular performers, they play tunes by the Beatles, songs by Elvis, and the Supremes. This sentence is a comma splice error. Also, you have gone wrong at the end of the sentence.
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angel capri(3) These stations focus on playing music by the most popular performers, they play tunes by the Beatles, songs by Elvis, and the Supremes.
This sentence is a comma splice error.
Also, you have gone wrong at the end of the sentence. Look closely at what you have done here.