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Vsuresh Posted 8 years ago
Grammar

Parallelism

Hi.

Topic: Faulty parallelism

Could you tell me if this sentence is correct?

The students in this class should either take freshman writing or have earned advanced placement on the assessment test.

  

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It's weird. Of course there is faulty parallelism, but other questions arise. Should the students in this class take freshman writing concurrently with taking this class, or after taking this class?

  • It's weird.
  • Of course there is faulty parallelism, but other questions arise.
  • Should the students in this class take freshman writing concurrently with taking this class, or after taking this class?
  • Or should they have taken freshman writing before taking this class?
  • If we don't know with any certainty what the writer wishes to say, it's hard to know how to fix the sentence.
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It's weird. Of course there is faulty parallelism, but other questions arise.

Should the students in this class take freshman writing concurrently with taking this class, or after taking this class? Or should they have taken freshman writing before taking this class?

If we don't know with any certainty what the writer wishes to say, it's hard to know h

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