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English 1b3 Posted 16 years ago
Grammar

Parallelism

You can discuss the concepts, with examples that you present yourself, explaining your choice.

Is this better written like this:

You can discuss the concepts, with examples that you present yourself, and that explain your choice.

Or is 'explaining your choice' not modifying examples, instead modifying 'you' in bold above?
  

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'Explaining your choice' is adverbial, and the original version is fine.

  • 'Explaining your choice' is adverbial, and the original version is fine.
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'Explaining your choice' is adverbial, and the original version is fine.

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