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Anonymous Posted 4 years ago
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Could you please check if my corrections of the lists are adequate? Thank you!

1) Sport helps the elderly to stay fit and healthy, improve their flexibility and balance, socialize and find friends to talk on a regular basis.

Correction: Sport helps the elderly to stay fit and healthy, to improve their flexibility and balance, to socialize, and to find friends to talk on a regular basis.

2) Doing crosswords promotes the brain’s work, helps focus and delay or prevent the onset of dementia or Alzheimer's.

Correction: Doing crosswords promotes the brain’s work, helps focus, and delays or prevents the onset of dementia or Alzheimer's.

  

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anonymous Could you please check if my corrections of the lists are adequate? Yes, your corrections are right, but the original sentences are faulty. Sport helps the elderly to stay fit and healthy, to improve their flexibility and balance, to socialize, and to find friends to talk with on a regular basis.

  • anonymous Could you please check if my corrections of the lists are adequate?
  • Yes, your corrections are right, but the original sentences are faulty.
  • Sport helps the elderly to stay fit and healthy, to improve their flexibility and balance, to socialize, and to find friends to talk with on a regular basis.
  • Doing crosswords improves brain function , helps focus, and delays or prevents the onset of dementia or Alzheimer's.
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anonymousCould you please check if my corrections of the lists are adequate?

Yes, your corrections are right, but the original sentences are faulty.

Sport helps the elderly to stay fit and healthy, to improve their flexibility and balance, to socialize, and to find friends to talk with on a regular basis.

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