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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
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Parallel structure (2 from A, 2 from B, and 2 from C)
I'm not sure if the following sentence sounds good to a natiave-speaker.
Six students will be recruited from different sites. It is hoped to have two from a rural area, another two from a suburban area, and another two from a urban area. In each area, one middles school and one high school student will be included.
Is there a way to make this more concise and clearer?
Six students will be recruited from different sites. It is hoped to have two from a rural area, another two from a suburban area, and another two from a urban area. In each area, one middles school and one high school student will be included.
Is there a way to make this more concise and clearer?
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Anonymous Six students will be recruited from different sites. It is hoped to have two from a rural area, another two from a suburban area, and another two from a urban area. In each area, one middle s school and one high school student will be included.
- Anonymous Six students will be recruited from different sites.
- It is hoped to have two from a rural area, another two from a suburban area, and another two from a urban area.
- In each area, one middle s school and one high school student will be included.
- Concise: Two students will be recruited from each of the 3 different sites: rural, suburban, and urban area.
- One will be from middle school and the other from high school.
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AnonymousSix students will be recruited from different sites. It is hoped to have two from a rural area, another two from a suburban area, and another two from a urban area. In each area, one middleConcise:sschool and one high school student will be included.
Two students will be recruited from each of the 3 different sites: rural, subur
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